Peer Review

Today my partner and I got feedback from our classamtes and teacher. Some benefits they noticed in our film were the different camera angles we used and the dialogue that we made the characters speak in the film. Also the shots taken of the car were good and different. The music was good for the title and background at the beginning as well, another person liked the different locations we used to make it unique and look like we were around the city. Some critics of the film was to add more suspensful music in some scens to block out some of the sounds or noises. Also to add more scenes on how the main character is deaf and to make the audience understand hiw she is deaf and how she copes with it. Another crtique was to add more lightning in the scene of the garage and to make the characters seem more like criminials, use a duffel bag instead of a backpack for the money to make it more noticebale and more like they robbed money. All of the feedback was very helpful and helped us see things in different point of views to improve our film and make it better.